On the American Character

"My sense is that American character lives not in one place or the other, but in the gaps between the places, and in our struggle to be together in our differences. It lives not in what has been fully articulated, not in the smooth-sounding words, but in the very moment that the smooth-sounding words fail us. It is alive right now. We might not like what we see, but in order to change it, we have to see it clearly."

~Anna Deveare Smith, American playwright, author, actress, and professor. Fires in the Mirror xli.



Grandma's Hands

This is one of my recent short stories. I struggled with past and present tense on this one, and finally settled on present tense for the entire thing. (Hopefully my editing was thorough.) Feedback is always welcome!

Grandma’s Hands
Mattie swallows the lump in her throat and stares at the yawning casket from across the room. Everyone else has looked in it already, pausing to kneel and pray. Now they are all sitting around on couches sipping coffee and whispering. Even Michelle has coffee, and she’s only twelve. Grandpa has found a chair off by himself. He sits very still, looking formidable. Mattie thinks about going to him instead of to the casket, but that would be putting off the inevitable. When she tried talking to him earlier, at a respectful distance, he had completely ignored her. His gaze remains stony now, as if examining something off in the distance that annoys him. She wonders if a “wake” means that you can’t sleep here. What if she falls asleep later? Would someone make her leave? Maybe that’s why Grandpa looks so rigid. He might be tired. They sure have some comfortable couches for a place where you have to stay awake. Yanking on the tight lace of her collar, Mattie looks around to make sure nobody is watching her. After an eternity of walking on the red and beige carpet, she is close enough to stand on tiptoes and peek over the side of the casket. 
            Grandma’s hands are the only thing she sees, folded neatly with brown rosary beads threaded between the fingers. Those same brown rosary beads with the varnish worn off in places that used to be on Grandma’s dresser. Mattie loved to place them around her neck when nobody was looking. The crucifix reached the floor so she was careful to double the string of beads to shorten them. She didn’t want the crucified Jesus on the beads to be angry or be stepped on. Mattie had enough to worry about as far as keeping Jesus and God happy with her. She figured you could only sin so much before they got tired of you.
 The hands. Shiny nails sat atop shiny skin, wedding rings gleaming even in this soft light. Grandma’s hands were never still like this—they always moved, they crocheted and sewed and made ice cream and put Band-Aids on skinned knees. They brushed stray locks of hair from children’s foreheads. They didn’t just lie there like this, holding the rosary as if they had nothing better to do. Someone in the hallway drops a tray of coffee cups.
            Crash
Mattie sits under the table in the kitchen, playing with Grandma’s cat, Miss Suzy. Miss Suzy thinks yarn is the most wonderful thing ever invented. She and Mattie never tire of the yarn game, and under the table, they both feel safe from grown-up feet. Grandma washes dishes and stirs a simmering pot of cherry pie filling, talking to Aunt Margaret who sits at the table with a cup of coffee, chain-smoking Pall Mall cigarettes. That’s another good thing about being under the table. The smoke stays mostly up above. Sometimes Aunt Margaret puts one cigarette out and lights another, but the first one isn’t all the way out and it just sits there, smoldering. She never even seems to notice, but keeps on talking and smoking, sipping her coffee with a mini wildfire right in her face. The smoldering ashes make Mattie think of the snakes they play with on the fourth of July, the kind of fireworks that kids got bored with but parents got for free when they bought the real stuff. Then they acted like they got something special just for the little ones. Whoopdie-doo.
            “Mattie, I’ve got a sandwich ready for you.”
            Mattie springs from beneath the table, spooking Miss Suzy into running behind the couch in the parlor. “Can I eat it on the steps?”
            “Of course.”
            She scampers out the kitchen door, through the mud room, to the back steps where she sits, sandwich in hand. Grandma had made the pickles that sat on the plate by the sandwich, in mid-summer when the garden was in a full riot of vegetables—tomatoes, cucumbers, onions, and rhubarb. Grandma had picked and sliced the cucumbers, boiled them in vinegar and canned them with her own hands.
Someone in the kitchen drops a dish and it shatters.
Crash
Mattie sits under the table in the dining room. Miss Suzy is nowhere to be found on this day. The weather is bitter cold and frost edges the windows, making everything outside seem like a smear of itself. Miss Suzy likes to stay near the furnace in the basement in the winter. There are mice down there too. Mattie plays with her doll. When she had opened the package two years before on Christmas morning, ecstatic to find the doll she had yearned for in the store, her mother told her that the name of the doll, printed on the box, was Miss McGoo. Mattie couldn’t read and she hadn’t been able to pronounce it. The doll had been Mushy-Goo ever since. Mattie talks to Mushy-Goo about the man that her mother is out on a date with that night. “His name is Milo and he has glasses and a funny beard. He has a rumbly voice like Santa Clause. I think Mommy likes him because she giggles a lot when he is around. He gave me a stuffed tiger but the tiger is not as pretty as you are.”
Grandpa sits at the head of the table, listening to a baseball game on the radio. He watches the same game on the TV in the living room. He hates the TV commentators, so he listens to the announcers on the radio instead. Occasionally he moves to the living room, turns on the television sound, and eventually begins to rant about the idiots who announce the games on TV. Then he shuffles back to his chair in the dining room and turns the radio back on. Mattie hears the inevitable clink of bottles as Grandpa puts an empty in the cardboard case next to his chair. “Sarah!” he shouts. Grandma comes in from the kitchen with a cold bottle of Budweiser, opens it with a bottle opener from her apron pocket, then goes back to the kitchen. Little is said between them.
Later, Mattie lies on the cot in the sewing room. It’s St. Patrick’s Day and the snow has not melted yet. Grandma goes to bed early, but Mattie can see Grandpa through the doorway, still sitting at the dining room table, but now the radio plays music. Old timey music that Mattie doesn’t like. I can’t stop loving you . . . croons a Lawrence Welk type of choir. Grandpa sings along unintelligibly, his head nodding forward now and then. In front of him lies an ashtray, a pack of cigarettes, a zippo lighter, and four unopened bottles of beer. He clutches an opened bottle in his left hand. Sometimes he misses his mouth when he takes a drink and he gets angry.
The song changes. Crazy arms that long to hold somebody new. Grandpa raises the fist that clutches the beer and hurls the bottle at the wall.
Crash.
Mattie opened her eyes, and for less than a moment the hands folded neatly in the casket hold life—they have color and they are about to do something—anything. Mattie stares and stares, willing those hands to reach out and brush the lock of hair across her forehead that never stays put. She closes her eyes and prays that just one more time she can feel Grandma’s hand caress her cheek to silently say I love you. She prays that just one last time she can see that index finger scolding Aunt Margaret for swearing in front of the children. Grandma always said it that way, “the children,” even when there was only one child there. But then the hands go right back to being the waxy things they are. She slouches away from the casket, past her older cousins where they fight with their own too-tight collars, Styrofoam coffee cups poised beneath red-rimmed eyes. Mattie slithers into Grandpa’s lap. She is the only one small enough to still do so. Together in silence, they finally cry.
           


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